Film school:Narrative Dialog Editing:Story of Penny and Eggbert:The rough edit

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Trim and assemble

 * I first trim the clips. I need a clip of the Eggbert's first dailog and then a clip of Penny's dialog and finally a clips of Eggbert's final dialog.


 * Then I assemble the trimmed clips to get the rough edit.


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 * bgcolor=Cornsilk colspan="2" |Note: Penny and Eggbert are 3D Poser models created by 3D Universe.  For this lesson, these characters were posed and rendered with the free DAZ Studio.
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Penny and Eggbert

 * I just want to hear the opening dialog in the wide angle establishing shot


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When trimmmed, the clip looks like this :
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Penny

 * I just want the the shot of Penny for Penny's dialog.


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When trimmmed, the clip looks like this :
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Eggbert

 * We just want the shot of Eggbert for Eggbert's final dialog.


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When trimmmed, the clip looks like this :
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 * Once I have assembled the three clips, the audio should sound natural. Each pause between the dailog should sound natural.


 * However, the picture will seem dull and boring.  Now I need to find the best visual transition by rolling the picture edits (without rolling the audio edits.)


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