Introduction to psychology/Psy102/Assessment/Essay/General feedback/Dreams

Good points

 * 1) Most essays mentioned Freud/Jung and the neurobiological theory and another, so generally a good coverage of theories in most essays.
 * 2) Nearly all included abstracts and interesting titles (some very funny and unique)
 * 3) Vast improvement in essay structure from psych 101 essays
 * 4) Introductions were done fairly well across the essays
 * 5) Overall they were generally done really well.

Need improvement

 * 1) Research could have been done more extensively, most essays focused on theory and only touched on research.
 * 2) APA was still an issue for a lot of the essays, both style and referencing. This was perplexing as you have provided a template!
 * 3) Students need to remember the essays do not use personal pronouns.
 * 4) Also a huge amount used upwards of 8 quotes which I think is too many, the most i counted was 16 in one essay which i doubt made the word count.
 * 5) Some students included tables and pictures and following the criteria more stringently is important.
 * 6) Conclusions on average needed to be stronger and more than a few sentences. Some student did not state their position from the argument they presented.