Talk:Historical Introduction to Philosophy/Determinism and the Problem of Free-Will

This article needs to be cleaned up. The citations need improvement, there are grammatical issues all over, and the leading and closing paragraphs don't open or close very well, among other things. I think this page could potentially help newcomers to philosophy if it were improved, so I plan to peck away at it every now and then. If you have in mind a way this page could be improved, please edit away!