Talk:Menomonie, Wisconsin History/El-MurrFudd

I think your first heading should be "Stout's Life" instead of James'. It sounds more formal.

"he had the opportunity to do big things for his community, and that he did" in this sentence I would delete "and that he did" "which is now know today as"- know should be known

Nice content!El-MurrFudd (discuss • contribs) 17:02, 8 December 2015 (UTC)