Talk:Menomonie, Wisconsin History/dovakhaleesi

Andrew Tainter was originally from New York, but he came to Wisconsin to take advantage of the booming lumber industry. I feel that it would be better to phrase this as "Andrew Tainter was originally from New York but eventually came to Wisconsin to take advantage of the booming lumber industry.

However, I think it’s a tribute to the logger she wanted to marry. I'm pretty sure you took this from your essay and you're still editing it, but be sure to take the I out of this.

Very interesting. Make sure to paraphrase everything down. There is a lot at the moment, so do your best to size it down to the best of your ability.