Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2011/Achievement motivation

Comments
The outline of your chapter looks like it will flow well once in progression. I like the timeline picture - but maybe you could make it a bit bigger because I can't really read the theoriests' names. Good job AngeM 07:22, 23 October 2011 (UTC)--
 * Thanks for the comments - I've only just starting playing around with placement of pictures, agree that particular picture does need to be bigger and in a different spot. Thanks again--Wikitwit 08:38, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

Hi Wikitwit, Your outline has piqued my interest. I look forward to reading more + understanding what motivates me to achieve.Crazydaisy 22:59, 24 October 2011 (UTC)Crazydaisy

Hey there - I agree, the timeline is a great idea. I think the way that you progress from the theory and then incorporate it into how to foster achievement is good. The quote is well-fitting also :) (Psych 125 03:30, 1 November 2011 (UTC))

Hi, this is page looks really good and it's very interesting to read about. Many of the articles I have read are similar to what you are saying. I was wondering if I could put your page under my external links as my page is on competitive motivation and they are quite similar. All the bestRednoodles 02:59, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Wiktionary
FYI, it looks like the Wiktionary definition got deleted on the basis that it was not a dictionary term, so I've changed that template to link instead to the Wikipedia article. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:13, 27 October 2011 (UTC) Really well researched and laid out - I liked the quiz - Magnolia28


 * It's looking great WikiTwit! From what I'm seeing you are certainly covering all bases.  The intro is interesting and defines what you are talking about well.  The theory discussion is very comprehensive, and yet it is still interesting and relevant.  The examples of how to 'foster achievement motivation' are really great.  They cover a good range of applications and I particularly like the way you've clearly emphasised the important 'take home' parts of each.  A lot to be learned in this topic!  Great work! HarryMMM 23:29, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

Rfoster 21:01, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:48, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

I have provided a summary page (that included the take home message) and I did talk about this in the presentation. --Wikitwit 05:16, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pointing this out. You're right, there is a summary page/section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:49, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

I have provided hyperlinks for the images used. --Wikitwit 05:16, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pointing this out. You're right, there is a page that is (briefly) shown with the links to the images at 4:59. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:49, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

I thought that I had agreed to release this under the 3.0 license, and have provided the details on one of the last pages of the presentation. Is there something else that I needed to do with this? --Wikitwit 05:16, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pointing this out. You're right, the final page (5:00) indicates Creative Commons release. Well done. This can also be provided in the file description and/or comments field. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:49, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Did you mean that I needed to provide a link to the chapter, or are you saying that I provided one? There is a link to the chapter provided. --Wikitwit 05:23, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pointing this out. You're right, the final page (5:00) provides a link back the chapter. Well done. This can also be provided in the file description and/or comments field. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:49, 12 December 2011 (UTC)