Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2013/Experiential avoidance

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Hi there, just leaving some feedback as requested on Moodle. I agree that the text should be broken up a little more. Under Acceptance and Commitment therapy (which you list under treatment), perhaps you could list the stages as a table instead. I've included the formatting here and you can copy and paste the code from the edit page if you want to include it.

NatKat88 (discuss • contribs) 11:25, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Hey, I'd recommend maybe adding a few images (if you can find any to do with your topic that is). Basically anything to break up the text a bit would be good as it's somewhat intimidating to see a big wall of text and nothing else. Other than that, great work!

Also, I just fixed your reference list as it wasn't quite APA format. You'll also need to look for the doi of a couple of the ones missing one, otherwise you can probably leave it or include a direct link to the file or say what website or database you accessed it from :) I think the only ones that are missing are the two ones by Hayes - Clarev (discuss • contribs) 10:29, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Hello, Your chapter is looking great! I am actually doing Acceptance and commitment therapy if you'd like to add my chapter as a reference to yours :)I also agree that perhaps adding some images would look great. U3065856 (discuss • contribs) 11:49, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Really good work. I'd recommend changing the formatting of the headings, at the moment you've got them set at being all a subheading of the very first one, even though there are several different headings. In the reference list I noticed that there is an article with more than 10 authors, according to APA if there are more than 8 authors you only have to include the first 6 then use et. al for the rest. Also don't forget to add a conclusion. --Caitlin Malicki (discuss • contribs) 11:56, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Hi there, Great job on your book chapter! I agree that you might need to find something to break up the paragraphs a little bit more as it is quite text heavy. Perhaps insert a few more pictures/graphs or even just some dot points or a few smaller paragraphs. All the best! U3037098