Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2013/Rumination

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Hi, your chapter looks really good overall. Just a few things that got me:

This was very good to read as I have no previous knowledge on rumination and as a university student it was easy enough to understand, not so sure about general public Kari2515 (discuss • contribs) 15:17, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
 * in your overview it says this book focuses on treatment on negative rumination and I wonder if you meant just your chapter within the wider context of the self help book looks at treatment
 * Metacognitive doesn't seem right to me, for me i believe it should be meta-cognitive but this might be subjective
 * You need to decide whether to use z or s in words which can have either as we are in australia with the usual s but i understand that american website (wiki) and research things might squew this
 * Be sure to go back and put that reference in where you have in the text :)
 * I think the rumination scale table is a good inclusion but needs a bit more explaining
 * Within the text a reference with multiple names need and not the & sign, that only goes in the brackets and reference list
 * I'm not sure if the sentences being indented and then not in the self help section was purposeful but to me it looks much neater being all lined up, if this is not in accordance to APA formatting and it was supposed to be like that Im sorry
 * I have also made some minor changes to the grammar
 * Also 1 last thing, you are way over the word limit like 1600 words over