Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Fight, flight, freeze system and emotion

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Hi

Sorry, I wish I had time to do a better review for you but my eyes are hanging out of my head. Just a couple of things I noticed:

I would be hesitant to use the abbreviation in the title - I wouldn't introduce it till the Overview. If you introduce it there then you probably need to consistently use the abbreviation.

You will need to correct your headings to Wiki standard (as per James' comment above).

You should probably outline FFS and then expand on why we have it (maybe switch these paragraphs around).

You need to put some hyperlinks in, eg FFS, emotion etc

The only other thing I recommend is being cautious of spending too much of your word limit on defining FFS and emotion and not focusing enough on theories and your focus question.

Chelsi CFD (discuss • contribs) 12:55, 26 October 2014 (UTC)