Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Loving-kindness meditation and emotion

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I noticed that you had your APA format wrong for your references so i fixed it. you had the title in italics instead of the journal name and volume number, also you wrote vol.8 instead of just writing 8 --Hynes08 (discuss • contribs) 01:11, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Figure of positive emotion
Hey! Here's that graph I helped you upload :) Just copy and paste the syntax and pop it where you would like it!

--U3083529 (discuss • contribs) 04:12, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

Minor edits
Hi Prue!

Just had a read through of your page - it is coming along really well! I have a suggestion though (and completely ok to disregard it), Maybe the introduction paragraph could be moved into the overview section??

With this sentence: "what Loving-kindness Meditation is and what if any effect this practice has on emotion" is it effect or affect? James posted this link a while ago on how to know when to use effect and when to use affect: http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/affect-versus-effect... and from reading this I have a feeling it might be 'affect' - but then again I get really confused with both. So maybe worth double checking??

Also, I made some minor edits with some grammar throughout and noticed you wanted to provided links here: neurotransmitter systems(link), as well as the autonomic nervous system (link) and the endocrine system (link)" - so I went ahead and linked them for you (I hope that is ok?! and hope that's what you wanted them linked to - if not please change them!!). There was also another part further down "(left-sided anterior)(link)" under the heading Loving-kindness meditation and the brain, I was going to link this for you but wasn't sure what you wanted to link it to so left it and just thought I would remind you it is there.

Overall, a really interesting read so far!

Jade --U3083529 (discuss • contribs) 00:57, 25 October 2014 (UTC)

APA style captions for images and tables
I recommend using APA style captions i.e., Figure 1, Figure 2 etc. for all images, graphs etc. and Table 1, Table 2 etc. for all tables. The caption text should not be in italics. For more detail and examples, see http://libguides.newcastle.edu.au/content.php?pid=113807&sid=1208571 -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:33, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:54, 1 December 2014 (UTC)