Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Muscle dysmorphia (The Adonis Complex) and motivation

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Hey, it looks like your chapter will be very interesting! I'm looking forward to reading it when it is done :) I noticed that you have two definition sections; "What exactly is "Muscle Dysmorphia"? and "What is Motivation" I have received some feedback on my own page that suggested cutting out definition sections and to instead add links to other pages that will explain that concept for you. For example like this: motivation. I think there may have also been a moodle post about cutting out definition sections. Doing this will give you more room to discuss the question you are trying to answer. Good luck! --U3053066 (discuss • contribs) 18:42, 24 October 2014 (UTC)

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