Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Serotonin and emotion

Low serotonin levels don't cause depression
This article may be of interest: http://psychcentral.com/blog/archives/2014/09/13/low-serotonin-levels-dont-cause-depression/ Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:00, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

tips and feedback
Hey! I have some tips and feedback for you;

- Firstly I have edited your chapter by placing indents at the beginning of each new paragraph as that is APA formatting. Just copy and paste the syntax i placed at the beginning of a new paragraph and paste in when you start new paragraphs!

- APA formatting also requires you to caption picture starting with 'figure' followed by the number of figure (italicized) and then a caption. for example i copied this from my chapter;

Figure 4."Eating a three-ounce cucumber is like drinking three ounces of water, but better," (Goldman, 2011, p.1)]]

- Also I added a table of contents because I noticed yours was missing!

- lastly, I will just suggest that it might be interesting and more engaging if you incorporate a quiz or other interactive material for readers to engage in.

I know you haven't finished yet, but i hope this helps!!!

Good luck!

Brookelouise23 (discuss • contribs) 06:24, 31 October 2014 (UTC)brookelouise23Brookelouise23 (discuss • contribs) 06:24, 31 October 2014 (UTC)

a few edits
Hi there,

This chapter looks great, I really enjoyed reading it. I have made a few minor edits such as: adding links to wiki pages on some terminology, and some sentences. I really liked the two tables you had it made things easy to read and sort of like a conclusion of the important factors.

Lucy90 (discuss • contribs)

RenaeLN (discuss • contribs) 02:08, 21 November 2014 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:29, 8 December 2014 (UTC)