Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Sex and stress

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:27, 3 December 2014 (UTC)

Subsequent revisions have been made. Feedback about these revisions: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:27, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) The first words in the Overview are now "sexual intercourse" but the title and subtitle refer to sex and sexual activity respectively. Greater clarity in terminology would be ideal.
 * 2) Some spelling errors have been corrected; some spelling errors have been introduced (e.g., "phycological")
 * 3) Some citations have been added.
 * 4) Some, but not all, uses of "we" have been rewritten into third person perspective.

Review of further changes
Substantial further revisions were made. Feedback: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:49, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) A substantially deeper engagement with relevant theory, research, and quality of written expression is evident through the revisions.