Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Alcohol addiction and emotion

Hello
Make sure to do more than 2 sub-headings for each heading. I know James Neil told us to do that in tutorials :)

Regards, Bobbie U3096609 (discuss • contribs) 01:18, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

Hey there. Your topic looks really interesting. You may consider adding the cultural elements of drinking, especially in a country like Australia where alcohol is abundantly sold at virtually every social event. It may be difficult for those addicted. All the best with your writing, --David James Stevenson (discuss • contribs) 07:19, 24 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello I have a definition for you to add Alcohol is defined as 'any compounds in which a hydroxyl group, -OH is attached to a sataurate carbon atom R3COH' (McNaught & Wilkinson, 1997). Addiction is ......

Additional theories you could discuss are alcohol myopia, attention-allocation hypothesis and the Drive theory.

Reference : McNaught, A. & Wilkinson, A. (1997) IUPAC. Compendium of Chemical Terminology, 2nd ed. (the "Gold Book"). Blackwell Scientific Publications, Oxford. doi:10.1351/goldbook.

Goodluck! --U3034876 (discuss • contribs) 00:06, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey there!

I found some interesting information that crosses into your selected topic, which is the James Lange theory in association to Alcohol and emotions. Although this article has a number of authors, James Lange looks more into defining binge-drinking quantities through resulting BACS, and the motivations of binge drinkers. It could be worth a look ☺

College binge drinking: what is it? Who does it? http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/12045482

If you look it up on the University of Canberra library page you can get access to it.

--U3098499 (discuss • contribs) 00:01, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey! This book chapter is fantastic and really informative. Well done! Don't forget to add hyperlinks where you can, as James suggested that can be the factor that pushes a chapter from a Distinction to a High Distinction. Let me know if you'd like me to go ahead and do some for you! U3048330 (discuss • contribs)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:31, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

Book chapter resubmission feedback
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:14, 17 December 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Additional content was provided -, but the relevance of the additional material is dubious (e.g., how does the content about alcohol myopia relate to the topic (alcohol addiction and emotion)?).
 * 2) Some corrections to grammar and the quality of written expression were made.
 * 3) Some interwiki links were added.
 * 4) Some additional detail is added to Figure captions.
 * 5) Basic review of a couple of research articles is now incorporated.
 * 6) A Conclusion is added.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:49, 25 November 2015 (UTC)

Multimedia resubmission feedback
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:25, 17 December 2015 (UTC) -- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:25, 17 December 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) The presentation now better focuses on the relationship between emotion and alcohol addiction.
 * 2) Images are now incorporated, but there is no evidence that permission was provided for the image re-use, so copyright may have been violated.
 * 3) The Conclusion claims a "strong link" but there is a lack of cited evidence to support this claim.
 * 4) The website address for the chapter is provided on the last slide; but no clickable link is provided.