Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Alcohol and aggression

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I do like how you have got clear headings and it all looks like it will run smoothly, I do think using current issues such as Tom Kelly's death in Sydney last year and the impact of his parents campaign is worth looking at just to link it back to current issue, but all looks great! good luck U3097561 (discuss • contribs) 13:06, 6 October 2015 (UTC)

I agree with the above comment, an interesting topic and well thought out headings and subheadings. As a suggestion you could talk about the introduction of lock out laws as a means to reduce alcohol related aggression and violence. This article discusses the approach taken in South Australia. Good Luck! Giancaspro, Mark. Late night lockout laws: Evaluating responses to alcohol-fuelled violence [online]. Alternative Law Journal, Vol. 40, No. 2, June 2015: 118-122. Availability:  ISSN: 1037-969X. [cited 14 Oct 15]. U3100474 (discuss • contribs) 04:03, 14 October 2015 (UTC)u3100474

Hey there - really great chapter and an interesting topic! Just a heads up with APA formatting for figures and tables - Images should be labelled 'Figure 1' and tables should be labelled 'Table 1'. --Sgerstenberg (discuss • contribs) 20:46, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey! Just a bit of feedback regarding your chapter - I really liked the general layout of your page, its engaging and easy to read. I also liked how you incorporated the case study throughout which made it easy to link the theory you were talking about to a practical example. As you have chosen such a topical issue, I agree with the others in that your chapter would really benefit from including a couple of real life incidents of alchohol fuelled violence (you could even start your chapter with a couple of cases to really engage the reader and draw them into the topic). One last minor thing - I noticed that you say that men are more likely to be agressive than women. While this is most likely the case, I think that this is quite a big statement to make and you may need more than just one reference to back it up (just a suggestion though!) --u3105740 (discuss • contribs) 22:53, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey! Great book chapter! I think its fantastic how you have included a 'practical application' highlighted in green throughout the chapter. It really reiterates the theory and makes it far more interesting than reading theory after theory without knowing how it really applies. The only minor suggestion I could make is to add an 'External links' section down the bottom of your chapter. I have noticed you have plenty of internal 'See also' links, but I think adding just a few External links would strengthen the overall quality of your chapter. Well done and good luck! U3048330 (discuss • contribs)

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