Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Anger and decision-making

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:32, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

Book chapter resubmission feedback
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:13, 6 December 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) See these additional copyedits.
 * 2) The chapter is now more complete.
 * 3) Avoid using 1st and/or 2nd person (e.g., "we"); write in the 3rd person perspective.
 * 4) Use default heading styles; remove italics
 * 5) Check and correct grammar (e.g., "Should I lie to my friend or should I tell them the truth?" - them should be singular e.g., s/he)
 * 6) One interwiki link was added; many more could be incorporated to make the text more interactive.
 * 7) The Reeve textbook is still over-used as a citation.
 * 8) A significant amount of new theory and research material has been added to the second half of the chapter.
 * 9) Additional references have been added to the reference list.
 * 10) Previous advice about using checking correct use of ampersands hasn't been heeded.
 * 11) Check and correct APA style for in-text citations (e.g., alphabetical order).
 * 12) Three useful theoretical perspectives have been added.
 * 13) The most important new section is titled "Negative and positive implications of anger on decision-making" - this is the key section because it cuts to the chase and clearly spells out psychological science's answer(s) to the question. This section could be exanded.
 * 14) A helpful Conclusion has been added.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:00, 25 November 2015 (UTC)