Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Cystic fibrosis treatment motivation

Progress looks great so far
Well done. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:23, 2 September 2015 (UTC)

Suggestions for your chapter
Hi, your topic sounds really cool. I found a links to previous book chapters you could possible include or look at. Health behaviours has stuff on motivating health behaviours.

Also dont forget to add some references from the past 10 years in your section on learned helplessness to help keep it current :) --U3081508 (discuss • contribs) 05:12, 28 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello there chapter looks really thorough and interesting. I have notices a few things. Your pictures and labels should be labeled as eg: Figure1. This would also save you words in your self-determination continuum section. Also to indent your references as per APA 6 in edit source mode of reference above your first reference goes (you will have to look at this in edit source to grab code):. They also are not usually in dote point form I thought. It looks great all the best with the finalisation. David James Stevenson (discuss • contribs) 09:21, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Some interesting readings?
Hello, I think a couple more subheadings would help your overview section read a bit easier (however its early days so I bet you have that planned already!). I noticed this web sight is already on your references list but thought that I'd share this any ways. It looked very relevant to your topic as it includes treatment from early childhood diagnosis through to teens and as well as in/out patient care. http://www.cysticfibrosis.org.au/cfa/standards-of-care

I also found this article in the Biomedical Science database. The study looks at treatment options as well as quality of life, which I imagine would be have some influence on motivation to seek and continue treatment. http://web.b.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/ehost/detail/detail?vid=5&sid=8710b45a-bce5-4268-843a-6d780d447d61%40sessionmgr112&hid=102&bdata=#AN=15790407&db=cmedm Hope this is useful, good luck! --U3100696 (discuss • contribs) 10:52, 16 October 2015 (UTC)

Easy to read
Hey there, Really interesting topic, sounds like a really progressive area in adherence to treatment. I really liked the way you broke down the theories and didn't lose track of the question. Maybe read it out loud to yourself, some areas might need a little correction. Also, maybe see if there is some further information on applying motivational factors to patients. :) --U3096856 (discuss • contribs) 05:49, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi! Really cool topic. Very interesting to read and well laid out. You've explored the various things you can do in wikiversity well! Great theories and links to other pages, really informative. If you need the template for the multimedia link for your page then here it is :) just paste your link where it says .... Might I suggest that you add an extra image/diagram towards the bottom of the chapter as there's a heap of writing that's hard to focus on. Great work! :) --Bt1718 (discuss • contribs) 9:51, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey! Great topic and book chapter. The information is very interesting and well written. The only thing i would suggest is adding some colour/boxes or more images where possible, just to break up the writing. Otherwise, fantastic job! U3048330 (discuss • contribs)

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