Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Hot memory and emotion

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Hey! I really liked your topic! In particular, the real life implications section is a great way to apply the knowledge. I also really loved the moving picture of the skull, very cool. I made a few suggestions in bold for you to look at and made a few grammatical changes, I hope you see them before the due time. I would also suggest breaking up the writing a little more if you could with a few more pictures, text boxes, borders or colours :) All in all, well done :) U3083545 (discuss • contribs) 07:39, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

== Comments = Hey! Your chapter looks great. Only thing I could see was with your images I think the APA format is underneath them you need to have 'Figure 1. ..." 'Figure 2. ...". Otherwise good job! U3097090 (discuss • contribs) 03:55, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

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Hey interesting topic,

Just a suggestion you might want to look at hot memory and post traumatic stress disorder. I came across this a little bit when researching my topic.

Cheers Njzarb (discuss • contribs) 03:04, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hi! Cool chapter. Has a nice layout to it and I love the animated image of the amygdala that you added. I like how you have real-life implications that can actually occur. Don't forget to add figure numbers under all your images too! Other than that, I think you've explained the key brain areas and summed it up well. Good use of external links as well. Just a suggestion, but maybe you could add the 'remember the last time..' section at the top of your page just above your overview or highlight it in a coloured box to draw some more attention to it. I think it looks a bit out of place being just below the title which is in a large font size and then having the multimedia link under it. Keep up the good work :) --Bt1718 (discuss • contribs) 12:27, 24 October 2014 (UTC)

Heading formatting
Remove bold from headings; just use default heading styles. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:02, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:11, 20 November 2015 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:46, 3 December 2015 (UTC)