Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Laughter and emotion

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Hi, I've made a few minor corrections to typos and punctuation errors however overall its a very interesting topic. Two small things. Text under the title Different types of laughter doesn't make sense. It might just be me but I read it three times and it is still off, might be the repeat of words but even without them I think it could use tighening. An example is being told of this is bring told off by a boss and for an unexplained reason you decide to have a giggle.

Second you dont have anything under the see other resources link heres a few things you might like to consider including http://www.readersdigest.ca/fun/jokes/laughter-best-medicine/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Laughter

http://www.helpguide.org/articles/emotional-health/laughter-is-the-best-medicine.htm

goodluck- u116040

--- Hey! Your topic is very interesting! I've made a few minor adjustments to your headings so they comply with the wikiversity standards. I would suggest putting in some more links with your definitions to other pages such as emotion and some other related book chapters from previous years. Also, your references should also be APA formatting with a hanging indent rather than a numbered list which can be done with this code: Other than that, your information looks great and I like that you have defined a lot of the key words. Good luck! --U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 11:54, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

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Hey! your content sounds great just some feedback that some pictures or diagrams would make your book chapter a lot more appealing to look at. --U3083568 (discuss • contribs) 02:54, 25 October 2015 (UTC)