Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Overcoming learned helplessness

Feedback
Hi, you have some good content so far and draw on some important theories, however here is some feedback to further develop your book chapter: --U3186377 (discuss • contribs) 21:40, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
 * add focus questions, great way to summarise topic and make it clear what information you will be presenting
 * references are not APA style, e.g. journals not italiscised
 * add external links, this shows you have looked for additional resources to further inform your topic and engages readers
 * link key terms to wikipages or external book chapters, e.g. learned helplessness and classical conditioning
 * avoid capitalisation within headings and in the body of text
 * use et al., year for in text citations with 3 or more authors
 * break up information under key research and theory, summarise key points, easier to digest
 * captions under images do not follow APA guidelines, i.e. must have 'Figure' italicised
 * Under health implications, the title motivation does not make sense in this context, perhaps consider putting 'cognitive' as a heading which is a health implication and tie in theory of motivation.
 * learned optimism should be under key theories, not treatment
 * intervention plans, is there more than one example?

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