Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Revenge motivation

Comments
Hi! Your page is looking really good! However, I suggest you add examples to your theories (e.g. how revenge would occur based on the theories). This would directly link the theories to your topic and facilitate greater understanding of the theories. Hope this helps! --U3082322 (discuss • contribs) 08:26, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Looks good - I would just put your refs as a heading. Quiz is nice touch too. Cheers U3040525 (discuss • contribs) 00:18, 10 September 2015 (UTC)u3040525

The chapter looks good. You may want to look at emotions related to revenge as well as motivations. All best Iga.leszczynska (discuss • contribs) 01:53, 9 October 2015 (UTC) Iga.leszczynska

Hi there,

I like the layout of the picture, looks like it will be easy to follow once you've uploaded more content - look forward to reading more! --U3096823 (discuss • contribs) 03:30, 18 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi! Awesome chapter :) I like the use of coloured boxes and how you've addressed all the aspects associated with motivation. The quizzes are great! Maybe keep it to the amount you have, not sure if you were going to add anymore in, but 3 is a good amount. With the external links as well, you can just highlight your text and click the link button and add the link in there to make it a hyperlink, instead of saying what the link is and providing it next to your title. Good luck :) --Bt1718 (discuss • contribs) 03:39, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

Reference tooltip
Hi there, your page is looking great!! Instead of putting "(Crowe & Wilkowski, 2013, Uniacke, 2000)." for example, you can use the reference tooltip that you would often see on wikipedia Body modification is the deliberate altering of the human anatomy or human physical appearance. [1] To do this all you need to do is: Revenge is a form of retaliation whereby one seeks out hostile confrontations with others, motivated by a desire to pay back another they feel is responsible for a hurt or suffering. add   straight after the reference and if you add (with no spaces in-between the brackets) onto your reference list it will automatically add every reference you choose to add using the reference tooltip, and if you click on the number where the reference would be it will take you straight to the reference list and highlight the reference that you clicked on. I found it to be extremely easy, and there is a lot of help online as well just incase :) heres a link that would explain it a lot better then myself.. referencing Good Luck! --U3098499 (discuss • contribs) 12:33, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Heading casing

 * Also note, remove bold and other fonts for headings; just use the default structure (e.g. Wikipedia articles all use default fonts and heading styles). -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:54, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Layout
Other suggestions: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:55, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Add bullet-points to See also and External links.
 * Consider adding some pictures
 * Remove bold from headings. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:58, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

Suggestions
Hello. What a interesting topic you have chosen. You write very clearly and you make some excellent points throughout your chapters. i also like the quizzes and the pictures too- very nice. The only thing i would suggest is incorporating the drive theory. the drive theory looks at this innate feeling of unrest, which forces individuals to take action in order to return to a harmonious relaxed state again. Thus, when explaining the reason for revenge, by applying the drive theory, the individual is committing revenge because something has occurred to disrupt the perpetrators regular inner state. Additionally, an article I found looked at how different events trigger different revenge processes in different countries. Apparently Americans took offence when their rights were violated whereas Koreans took offence when their sense of duty and obligation were threatened. Another study looked at revenge creating consequences which are opposite than what individuals believed. For example, research has shown that people who punish continually think about the event and person, but people who do not seek revenge let go and continue life and don't get as caught up in the situation. ref: Price, M. (2009). Revenge and the people who seek it. Monitor on Psychology, 40(6). Carlsmith, K. M., Wilson, T. D., & Gilbert, D. T. (2008). The paradoxical consequences of revenge. Journal of personality and social psychology, 95(6), 1316.

Hope this helps you and I am looking forward to reading your final chapter :) Good luck! --U3034876 (discuss • contribs) 10:36, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Reference list APA style
Note that the references are not in APA style. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:59, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

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