Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Self-esteem and happiness

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Hi! What an awesome topic and I really like the way you've structured the content. You've made it a pleasure to read. Only suggestion I have is to maybe make your chapter a bit more interactive for the reader. Perhaps add in a quiz to test what they've learnt, maybe a link to a self esteem measure online (Maybe a site that uses this scale of self-esteem, or a case study/anecdote to make it more relateable? But overall, really awesome job so far! Can't wait to read the finished product U3096454! (discuss • contribs) 13:18, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi! Nice chapter! I like the lovely photo of the elderly lady at the beginning and how happy she looks. I like how you've asked a few questions as you've opened up the chapter, to get the reader thinking. I think it could benefit from a few more images instead of just writing, maybe adding some colour to the table could brighten it up too. Someone posted a really cool link to a heap of different codes for colours you can use in your table: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_colors:_A%E2%80%93F After where it says 'wikitable' (in the edit source tab) at the beginning of your actual table, just put 'style="background: #place code for whatever colour you would like it to be here". Consider a few more external links. Other than that, looks really good :) Well done. --Bt1718 (discuss • contribs) 12:50, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey thereǃ You write wellǃ Really enjoyed your chapter. I have made minor wikiedits regarding sentence structure, and fragment revising, and removed contractions. I was wondering if you could provide a page number for the line you quoted? Great job and good luckǃ--U3059210 (discuss • contribs) 00:34, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi, your chapter looks good. I would recommend adding more pictures and more charts if possible and maybe a quiz to have the reader become more interactive. CheersUu3148421 (discuss • contribs) 07:53, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey, so far your chapter looks really well structured. My advice would be to add some more pictures or a quiz to test the readers understanding of your topic. Good luck on finishing up !!

Hi, I thought your chapter was great! the only thing I would suggest was just to have conclusion at the end rather than summary and conclusion. I also think Mr smiley is a great touch. good luck :) U3040525 (discuss • contribs) 06:27, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

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