Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Sex crime victim emotion

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Hi there,

I just had a read of your book chapter. I think your structure is quite good. I know that you are still in the draft stage but I look forward to seeing some images and other content being added! Also I may not be correct, but I think we are expected to use APA in text referencing not endnotes. I have starred your chapter and will look out for more content to be added. All the best. --U3096823 (discuss • contribs) 00:49, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey! Nice start to your chapter, can't wait to see the finished product. Like the person above said, I'm pretty sure we have to use APA referencing, so just keep that in mind :) I like the different types of sex crimes you listed and the emotions and physical effects. Maybe add some of those into a table instead of just listing each one? It might add some colour to your page. I was wondering if you were going to go into more detail about the different sex crimes? Even if it's just one sentence about each one, that would be good to explain each one. Keep up the good work. --Bt1718 (discuss • contribs) 12:43, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

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