Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Amygdala in sport

Formatting
Hi there,

I hope you dont mind, but I've added an APA hanging indent template to your references list.

cheers,--Muzz2016 (discuss • contribs) 01:48, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Audrey O&#39;Mara (discuss • contribs) 03:17, 19 October 2016 (UTC) I know you may still be working on your page but I have gone through and made some minor edits and corrections to grammar and spelling (I hope you don’t mind).

Also to note:
 * Under the heading 'Positive hijack' you have left off the year (APA) after your first mention of the author.
 * Under ‘Amygdala hijack’ first paragraph – There is a list of information around where the amygdala projects information to, this information might be more accessible presented in a table or using dot-points.

- I was wondering if it may be better to move your "Social Contributions" to your user page rather than have it on your book chapter page? Just a suggestion. You book chapter will look better in my opinion. --Sophia sk16 (discuss • contribs) 05:18, 23 October 2016 (UTC)

Headings Amygdala Hijack
Hello,

I have moved your Amygdala Hijack & Positive Hijack under the Amygdala Hijack in Sport section. I have also changed Prevention into a Main heading rather than a sub heading.

Hope this helps/is useful!

Thanks, Zoe --U3112339 (discuss • contribs) 02:04, 16 October 2016 (UTC)u3112339

Structure
Avoid having a single sub-section within a section; either add another sub-section or merge the content into the higher level section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:23, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:09, 20 November 2016 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:47, 20 November 2016 (UTC)