Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Attachment type and emotion

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Hi there, I found this resource regarding a developmental-functionalist theory of emotions in attachment type. Here is the link: http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1461673031000108496 hope you find this helpful U3117451 (discuss • contribs) 02:34, 14 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi, interesting topic... During my research on Emotional intelligence for my chapter I came across a couple of journal articles that relate to attachment styles and EI. I think they would be helpful if you wanted to go that way with your chapter. Best of luck with your chapter :) http://ac.els-cdn.com/S1877042813018909/1-s2.0-S1877042813018909-main.pdf?_tid=154c8506-8f1e-11e6-8da1-00000aacb35e&acdnat=1476127185_45cb3ab0a7bdd8933788e823076b238a http://ac.els-cdn.com/S187704281102012X/1-s2.0-S187704281102012X-main.pdf?_tid=273f7840-8f1e-11e6-b7d1-00000aacb360&acdnat=1476127215_731f5579854c683ffd43fc57f816ef4e--U3090066 (discuss • contribs) 19:19, 10 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi there, just had a look through your chapter: "Whichever suggested definition one selects, Zemach (2001) suggests that many theorists will fall into one of two opposing groups" this sentence is a little bit vague; perhaps you might consider rewording the first section to add some clarity? CheersU3117451 (discuss • contribs) 01:35, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi there, You have a good outline of content but I think adding images will break up the text and make it easier and more inviting to read. You can do this going onto the wiki commons site https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page. simply search what you want an image of e.g hugging (to symbolise attachment), click on the image, copy the file name, go to your wikiversity book chapter, click insert>media>paste the file name>give it an APA style figure name. Hope this helps. :) I added one as an example. Hope this is okay U3115468 (discuss • contribs) 02:22, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey, Good start to your chapter, can't wait to see the end result. I completed some minor spelling and grammatical errors, best of luck with the rest of the chapter! --U3090066 (discuss • contribs) 17:43, 18 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi again, I have re-read through your chapter and it is looking good. I fixed a few more grammar errors. One thing I would suggest is not to start sentences with things like "in which" as these are generally used mid-sentence and may confuse the reader. For example you have written "In which he identified five emotions; Enjoyment, Sadness, Anger, Fear, and Disgust." as a sentence on its own but it sounds incomplete. Just minor editing things. U3117451 (discuss • contribs) 02:42, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

"He also argued a difference between biologically inherent processes and learned processes." I would consider the relevance of this sentence as there is no follow up on why this is important information or how it relates to the rest of the content.

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