Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Emotional intelligence and job performance

Comments
Hello,

Your book chapter is amazing!!!! It is coming along really well, you're information is easy to read yet very in depth. I can see how our topics overlap. The only feedback I can give is that your diagrams and graphs are a little hard to read - is there any way you can increase their size?

All the best U3081523 (discuss • contribs) 22:16, 19 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey! Your chapter is looking really good! Coming along together very well, sorry I haven't been much help in your process as I saw that you posted in my discussion quite some time ago. But I have an article that relates to job performance that you could potentially use in one of your unfinished sections: http://ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=pdh&AN=2010-00343-013

And you could also use this one: http://ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=pdh&AN=2006-07381-019 its about EI in young adulthood and middle adulthood, which you could use with job performance because of the age group :) Goodluck with the rest of your chapter, it's looking fantastic! --U3100166 (discuss • contribs) 23:38, 19 October 2016 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi there, Your chapter is incredible. I love how you have used full advantage of the Wikiversity platform and included lots of different boxes and interactive features to brighten it up. My only suggestion is to consider moving Figure 2, as where it is placed at the moment between Figure 1, 3 and the subheadings looks cluttered and squashed. Best of luck. I hope this was helpful. 23/10/2016 - U3108945

Figure captions
Consider providing more detailed, explanatory figure captions that help to connect the figures to key points being made in the text. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:16, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

Structure
User:U3090066, avoid having a single sub-section within a section; either add another sub-section or merge the content into the higher level section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:35, 23 October 2016 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:25, 17 November 2016 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:47, 20 November 2016 (UTC)