Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/False physiological feedback and emotional appraisal

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Your use of example scenarios is a nice touch and helps to further understand the points you have made. I think including a few more theories is important to explain your topic with further empirical evidence. Also adding a topic is helpful because it is a little hard to determine what exactly your are focusing on. Good luck with the rest of your book chapter it is an interesting topic. U3115468 (discuss • contribs) 01:37, 5 October 2016 (UTC)

With your two examples for false physiological feedback and emotional appraisal, perhaps put them in two columns and coloured text boxes (side by side). I think it would break your page up a bit and as they are examples, not just theories, would draw attention to them. Here's a link so you know what I mean. :) Otherwise looks like a great start, good luck! https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/User:Jtneill/Sandbox/Tables_and_boxes --U3083764 (discuss • contribs) 01:29, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Interesting topic and it seems you are definitely on the right track. I noticed that the majority of your references are quite historical, I attached a link to a more recent JA that I found interesting https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1890305/ Hope it helps :)--U3090066 (discuss • contribs) 20:32, 8 October 2016 (UTC)

Hello, thanks for your suggestion about using Arnold Lazarus theories on my page [| Blushing and emotion] I found a few articles for you to search that could assist you in biofeedback (full text versions on uni library website)

•	A cognitively oriented psychologist looks at biofeedback

•	Biofeedback-based training for stress management in daily hassles: an intervention study.

This website also has some interesting points that might assist you in directing your research https://www.addiction.com/a-z/multimodal-therapy/ they listed a reference Corey, Gerald. Theory and Practice of Counseling and Psychotherapy. 6th ed. Belmont, CA.: Wadsworth/Thomson Learning, 2001. --Audrey O&#39;Mara (discuss • contribs) 02:47, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

Structure
Avoid having a single sub-section within a section; either add another sub-section or merge the content into the higher level section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:52, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

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