Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Habit theories and behaviour

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Hey, I cant tell what direction your taking yet but i just thought I would mention that Cloningers,  biosocial model of personality and the temperament and character inventory- temperament has been linked with habit formation and maintenance. Here is one journal that talks about it Cloninger, C. R. (1994). Temperament and personality. Current opinion in neurobiology, 4(2), 266-273.. - i hope that helps --U3080948 (discuss • contribs) 05:40, 18 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I have found some journal articles the connections between behaviour formation and habit, hope they are going to be helpful. http://www.tandfonline.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/doi/abs/10.1080/17437199.2011.603640 http://eab.sagepub.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/content/47/10/1089 http://zh9bf5sp6t.search.serialssolutions.com/?ctx_ver=Z39.88- another one with the title "How are habits formed: Modelling habit formation in the real world" published in 2010 on European Journal of Social Psychology--U3121927 (discuss • contribs) 08:56, 19 October 2016 (UTC)

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Avoid having a single sub-section within a section; either add another sub-section or merge the content into the higher level section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:38, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
 * User:Amyreilly, pinging to make sure that you've received this feedback. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:49, 23 October 2016 (UTC)

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Hi there! Your chapter has a lot of great content so far, can I suggest adding more pictures to break it up a bit? and some pretty boxes! They make it look pretty :). Just watch some of your punctuation and grammar, make sure to proof read everything before you submit! also in your section called video games "I think most of us would be able to relate to hearing our mum's yelling at our younger siblings to "get off the xbox and go and play outside"." this statement is a little too informal, I would advise against using first person. Perhaps try something like [In today's society, most young people can relate to hearing their mothers stern voices to "get off the xbox! go play outside!" as an memorable part of childhood.] Just be weary of statements like these throughout your chapter, but you have covered a lot of great content :) good luck with the rest!--U3100166 (discuss • contribs) 11:17, 23 October 2016 (UTC)

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