Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Leisure motivation

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Hi I have found an article that you may find helpful it is titled: Relationships Among Adolescents' Leisure Motivation, Leisure Involvement, and Leisure Satisfaction: A Structural Equation Model. It can be accessed through the university library website using EBSCOhost. Take a look at the model on page 1191 it may be helpful for you. Best of luck! http://web.b.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/ehost/detail/detail?vid=4&sid=8c1a00bf-db61-454c-8c67-100c37e09569%40sessionmgr1&bdata=#AN=84765115&db=heh --LeoDean1993 (discuss • contribs) 10:11, 2 October 2016 (UTC)

Formatting
Hi there,

I hope you don't mind, but I've added an APA hanging indent template to your reference list.

Cheers, --Muzz2016 (discuss • contribs) 01:51, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I made some grammatically changes to your overview so it reads a bit more easily. Hope you don't mind me changing it automatically. Your page sounds interesting keep it up!! U3115468 (discuss • contribs) 04:45, 9 October 2016 (UTC)

Possible direction for motivational theories about leisure
Hey there,

I found some articles on positive psychology and nature therapy which could be an interesting direction to take leisure motivation chapter in. So for example, a case study on the benefits of nature therapy for hikers or people who love the outdoors.

Or using positive psychology as a part of a nature therapy intervention to increase leisure motivation.

Positive psychology http://s3.amazonaws.com/academia.edu.documents/38825564/Seligman_and_Csikszentmihalyi_salud_positiva.pdf?AWSAccessKeyId=AKIAJ56TQJRTWSMTNPEA&Expires=1476245518&Signature=CBRh%2BrEOB8JrWpkfiV%2Bp3mbYbRw%3D&response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%3DPositive_Psychology_An_Introduction.pdf

Positive psychology and outdoor education https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Dene_Berman/publication/258150396_Positive_Psychology_and_Outdoor_Education/links/55fffa8508ae07629e51ec01.pdf

Nature-assisted therapy http://plus.rjl.se/info_files/infosida40834/nature_assisted_terapi_Wahrborg_2011.pdf

Cheers, --Muzz2016 (discuss • contribs) 03:12, 12 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey, I came across and article that may be of use to you, good luck! Padhy, M., Valli, S. K., Pienyu, R., Padiri, R. A., & Chelli, K. (2015). Leisure motivation and well-being among adolescents and young adults. Psychological Studies, 60(3), 314-320. doi:10.1007/s12646-015-0327-5--JEMwarren (discuss • contribs) 09:58, 13 October 2016 (UTC)

Overjustification effect
Hi, I was having a quick read of your chapter and thought it would be worth mentioning something on the overjustification effect and how it influences behaviours or activities that are intrinsically motivated. Here's an article that could be useful http://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s10864-013-9193-1 --Jbboys (discuss • contribs) 05:49, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

APA style for figure and table captions
Check/correct that APA style is used for figure and table captions. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:22, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

Headings
Remove full-stops from headings. Also, avoid having only one sub-section within a section; either add a second sub-section or merge the content into the higher level section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:23, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi!

I like how relatable the overview section is, because it's such a common experience! I think you could maybe link 'leisure' to a wikipedia article, just in case.

I've also edited some of your in-text references as the punctuation was off, and I've also fixed some minor punctuation errors within the text. I made sure to clearly log everything under the 'View History' tab so you can undo it if you need to!

I have one other thing: under the intrinsic motivation section you mention autonomy, competence and relatedness and follow all of them with 'in self-detemination theory'. I think you can leave that out after the first one because the reader knows that you are still on the same topic.

I hope you find this helpful!

Cora --Cora.boyle (discuss • contribs) 08:18, 23 October 2016 (UTC)

Otherwise, this is a really interesting read (especially at this time of the semester!)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:32, 16 November 2016 (UTC)

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