Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Parkinson's disease treatment motivation

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Hi - I think the medications used in Parkinson's disease (levodopa/carbidopa) that you mentioned are usually taken up to five times a day in most people. Do you think this need to regularly take medications could affect people's quality of life and adherence to treatment? --U3100675 (discuss • contribs) 08:49, 14 October 2016 (UTC)

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Hi, your book chapter is great! I especially like the use of coloured templates to break it up and seem more inviting. Also, your video multimedia of the tremors example is an excellent way to portray what they are really like in affected patients. Good luck! U3115468 (discuss • contribs) 22:43, 14 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! I noticed that in your reference list you have Kalat (2016), while in-text you have Kalat (2014). Also, you haven't included the location and publisher information for this in the reference list. I'm not sure if you need to reference the chapter within the textbook as it is not written by a separate author. I hope this makes sense. I've also made a few minor edits to your reference list: I added the doi for the article "Parkinson’s disease: clinical features and diagnosis"; I italicised the journal name and volume number for the article "Drug adherence in Parkinson's disease"; and I fixed a typo (changed Newyork to New York). Your chapter looks really great by the way; I like how you have highlighted key terms by bolding them, and also how you have broken up the text with lots of colourful boxes and images. --U3100368 (discuss • contribs) 13:10, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi. Great chapter, very well thought out and interesting to read. I made a small spelling correction to your YouTube link (i.e. changed Pakinson's to Parkinson's). Also, there are some good quotes on Parkinson's that you might want to include in your chapter, maybe before the overview to grab attention. http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/keywords/parkinson.html U109993 (discuss • contribs) 20:22, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

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Check use of wiki links for the first time key terms are used - e.g., I had a quick look, but didn't see links to the Wikipedia articles about PD and dopamine on first use of these key terms. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:06, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:12, 21 November 2016 (UTC)