Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Recycling motivation

Multimedia link
Hi- just noticed that you have not added the link box to your page yet. If you do want to add it, this is the code you can put into edit source to get the format that James wants. Here is the code: for the whole format of the page, James has put the code up on moodle: http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=410261 --JazNF (discuss • contribs) 05:44, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Headings
Hi - great job on adding some headings, I've helped a bit with adding the heading formatting. Jtneill test1 (discuss • contribs) 09:19, 10 August 2016 (UTC)

Great progress
Fantastic to see this developing. Jtneill - Talk - c 10:01, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi there, chapter content is looking great! I wish i was as organised as you, ahaha! i feel as if shuffling around some of the content in your sentences may be beneficial. In my experience, the easiest way to do this is to read each sentence on its own, and see if it makes sense out of context. I hope that helps :) Well done! :) HomerIncognito (discuss • contribs) 06:42, 13 September 2016 (UTC)

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Hi, Well done on your chapter, you've made recycling interesting! :) I like how you've compared other nations/areas around the world, and also the use of the case study the whole way through. Only thing I noticed was in the case study sentences, eg. "Matthew’s girlfriend Julia doesn’t want to take out the recycling". There are a few contractions that you might want to change, just because it's still an academic piece of writing. (I think it reads better how it is, but better to be safe!) Otherwise great job :)--U3083764 (discuss • contribs) 02:05, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

--Jazznicol (discuss • contribs) 04:16, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

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Hi! I hope you don't mind but I corrected a few grammatical errors I saw, but apart from this, this is a great chapter! Really informative. There were a few spots at the beginning of paragraphs to where you make a statement without a reference. Just in case, it might be case to find a reference for these, otherwise great job! :)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:57, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:02, 21 November 2016 (UTC)