Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Youth suicide motivation

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Hi Leah, I found this chapter really informative and interesting! I think this subject is really important to talk about. The only thing that I could suggest is maybe discussing the recovery and treatment options? Or as mentioned below in another feedback, some services for those in the community.- u3165502

Hi Leah, this is a really great chapter! Maybe an area to include would be adding some services in the community to help young individuals e.g. Lifeline or Beyond Blue. Also another point may be to include a few more questions in the quiz at the end of the study. Possibly some questions that they didn't know the answer to before reading the chapter. u3115009

Hey Leah, chapter is looking good, just thought I would share a link to an article on optimism as a protective factor hope its helpful http://rdcu.be/lmD5 Regards, u3094046 --B Laurie (discuss • contribs) 08:17, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey this is u3081127 (also known as Caitlin), I think this chapter is great and really important. Maybe you could describe community organisations to counteract and reduce youth suicide. Such as Beyond Blue or Youth groups. Keep going!!! u u3081127 15:57 11/10/16

Hi Leah, your chapter looks like it's been structured quite well and I think you've included some really interesting theories to explain teen suicide motivation. Have you thought about discussing how to overcome suicidal thought desires? I found this eBook chapter that discusses a dialectic model as a means for intervention in changing suicidal motivations: http://ebookcentral.proquest.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/lib/canberra/reader.action?docID=1388813&ppg=21 I look forward to reading the rest of your chapter. Dana. Tuesday 11/10/16 - 9:13pm (Moodle)

Hey Leah, your book chapter looks great! It is structured really well. Good job! I also like the theories you have included to explain motivation for teen suicide. And how you have provided a help line. My one suggestion would be maybe talking about how to conquer suicidal thought desires specifically? Kind regards, Franchesca. Tuesday 11/10/16 - 12:52pm (Moodle)

Hi Leah, I just had a read of your chapter. I really like the diagram you have inserted about risk and protective factors as well as the case study you have used. Have you considered cultural differences when talking about suicide motivation? For example suicide bombers or Kamikazes, suicide pilots in Japanese culture. They might use other motivations such as religion or purpose for suicide. Jasmine. Tuesday 11/10/16 - 1:43pm (Moodle)

Hey, Looks like the chapter is coming along well. Can I suggest a content warning at the beginning of your chapter for people that may be triggered? Apart from that I think it was mentioned earlier but some more emphasis on NGO's and support groups throughout the community. Good luck with finishing the chapter off! --U3090066 (discuss • contribs) 15:25, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

Structure
Avoid having a single sub-section within a section; either add another sub-section or merge the content into the higher level section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:18, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

Changed common moitvators heading
Hey! Just changed your 'most common motivators' heading to 'common motivators'. Just thought that it flowed a bit better. Feel free to change! Awesome chapter otherwise, interactive, informative and interesting.

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