Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Delayed reinforcement and motivation

Comments
Hi, just a few ideas for the final formatting and editing of your chapter.

For formatting:
 * With the titles it might be good to have multiple subtitles under each main title, as in a couple of these it appears there is only one subtitle.
 * Perhaps by making some slightly broader titles you could fit multiple things under each banner as different aspects of the concept (without having to change your substantive material)

Also. two edits that I noticed are:
 * The subtitle 'Demographics' has been misspelt as 'Demograghics'
 * Figures 3 and 4 appear to have been labelled in the wrong order

I hope this helps! --Liam C (discuss • contribs) 23:47, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Thank you Liam that's very helpfull advise, also thanks for the heads up about the spelling mistake :D--Dom M.S (discuss • contribs) 00:59, 22 October 2017 (UTC)

Heading casing
Thank you, that's very good to know --Dom M.S (discuss • contribs) 12:10, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Referencing
Hey Dom! Just a tip regarding some of your referencing so its consistent - the new APA style formatting for DOI should look something like this: https://doi.org/10.1037/arc0000014 as opposed to the older style which appeared as: doi:10.1037/arc0000014 Here's a link explaining it more: http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2017/03/doi-display-guidelines-update-march-2017.html Hope that helps! --U3119363 (discuss • contribs) 05:49, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Overjustification Effect
Hey Dom! I recently completed a behaviour modification plan for another unit of mine, and I found evidence of an overjustification effect which is present in reinforcement contingency plans. This effect is really applicable to your topic as it is situated on intrinsic motivation for an external reward. I also found that this is mediated by the length of reinforcement (i.e. delayed or immediacy of reinforcement). So, as you can see really applicable to your topic. Here are a few sources that could aid in your development of your chapter relative to the overjustification effect;
 * Peters, K. P., & Vollmer, T. R. (2014). Evaluations of the overjustification effect. Journal of Behavioral Education, 23(2), 201-220. doi:10.1007/s10864-013-9193-1
 * Bright, C. N., & Penrod, B. (2009). An evaluation of the overjustification effect across multiple contingency arrangements. Behavioral Interventions, 24(3), 185-194. doi:10.1002/bin.284
 * TANG, S., & HALL, V. (1995). the overjustification effect - a metaanalysis. Applied Cognitive Psychology, 9(5), 365-404.

Hope this helps with your topic! Can't wait to read more --U3144362 (discuss • contribs) 02:36, 11 October 2017 (UTC) u3144362 1:36PM 11 October 2017

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