Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Depression and study motivation

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Hi U3068664, just a quick tip that you may find useful, you can quick start your chapter by downloading a template that will give you an initial structure for your chapter if you would like to. If you are interested in doing this check out the instructions in the purple box on the Author guidelines page. Cheers --EmmaCane28 (discuss • contribs) 11:49, 2 September 2017 (UTC)

Test comment. Jtneill - Talk - c 07:28, 6 September 2017 (UTC)

Hey! I noticed you haven't started your Wikipedia page. Here is a link to a YOUTUBE tutorial that I found really helpful in the intial stages of constructing my page. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T_k_VbCDm2Y Goodluck --U3117399 (discuss • contribs) 02:40, 1 October 2017 (UTC)

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I was just having a look at your chapter, it's really coming along! I really like your use of case studies, makes the chapter a lot more interesting. I would recommend that you make use of an image in the first part as the page is a little plain before you get to the first case study. That being said your page is really informative my only suggestions would be cosmetic. --Amelia Smith-Koppie (discuss • contribs) 18:08, 19 October 2017 (UTC)

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Hey there, your article is looking amazing, with heaps of info and lots of engaging information like the quiz and spot on Case studies. I just thought I'd give you the heads up in case you hadn't counted yet, that you appear to be over the word count (unless you're a grad student). Even if you are a grad, you appear to have another few points at the bottom of the page to make, as well as all of your references. Hope you see this in time, best of luck. Give me a heads up on my page if you want a hand culling the word count, it's a specialty :) RainbowUnicorn97 (discuss • contribs) 22.51 20 October 2017 (UTC)

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Hey. Not sure if you've been marked yet, but I removed a misplaced line above your title. Also, if you haven't been marked for the multimedia presentation, yours is set to private and can't be viewed. That may be totally intentional, but just heads-up in case it's not.

Cheers.

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Hey there! I know I am a little late to give feedback, but just in case you had any interest in touching up your topic to put in to a portfolio or anything; I thought it still might be useful to leave some comments I had! This is a very interesting topic that you chose. Firstly, Id like to suggest potentially adding in some additional hyperlinks to wikipedia pages - it really helps the reader understand key terms. For instance, if you added in a few hyperlinks to key words like "motivation" and "Depression" that would be great backreading for a reader. I hope you dont mind, but I added in a few hyperlinks to explain what I mean! Feel free to delete them if you wish. I love you use of case studies and how they are centred in the middle of the page - it really draws attention to them. I found an article which may be beneficial for readers - you could potentially link it to external links, or add it in to your chapter somehwere else. It's APA formatted reference is below. It was a questionnaire based study examining mood and anxiety, depressive symptoms, conditional goal setting and BIS and BAS. Results mainly coaligned with hypotheses in that depression and anxiety impacted goal setting and motivation.
 * Dickson, J., Johnson, S., Huntley, C., Peckham, A., & Taylor, P. (2017). An integrative study of motivation and goal regulation processes in subclinical anxiety, depression and hypomania. Psychiatry Research, 256, 6-12. doi:10.1016/j.psychres.2017.06.002

I hope some of this information is useful! Good luck with your final grade

Demibree (discuss • contribs) 22:40, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

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fixed spelling? tag and rewrite to improve clarity sentence --Brianna Meddemmen (discuss • contribs) 14:37, 17 October 2021 (UTC)