Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Drive reduction theory of motivation

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Hi there Archana, I like the simple layout of your book chapter thus far, especially how you have broken down the definition part of your chapter - something I have not seen utilised in other chapters, and also mine for that matter. I was thinking that a good idea would be to incorporate a case study that runs through your chapter which illustrates this theory in daily life. It might also be worth looking into one brian region (i.e. hypothalamus, amygdala, hippocampus etc.) and do an extensive review on this. I also think maybe a flowchart of drive reduction theory may make your page 'pop' and add an interactive element to your chapter! Best of luck Jane --U3144362 (discuss • contribs) 11:24, 14 October 2017 (UTC)u3144362

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--EmilyWoodward (discuss • contribs) 12:58, 22 October 2017 (UTC) Hi there, Very interesting topic, it looks as though you have done a lot of research into this topic and have some interesting theories listed. I wonder, to make it more personal if it might work to talk about this in the real world. How can we harness drive reduction theory to improve well being? can we?

Hello, I am aware that you book chapter is finished and just wanted to say great job! The page had plenty of information that was insightful and useful. Only thing i would suggest is that more pictures might be needed to make the page more intriguing, however this is unchangeable now so good job! u3141330 (User: U3141330} 22:20 3rd September 2017G(discuss)contribs)

Multimedia
Hey. Just thought I'd say you did awesome with the multimedia presentation. The information and the audio are both clear, and it was all paced really well.

Feedback
Hey there! Super interesting topic. I talked a little bit a drive in my chapter on sexual motivation. If you are still interested in your chapter, Id recommend looking into drive in regard to sexual motivation. Its one of the proposed theories as to why sexual motivation exists. Below is an article I came across in my research
 * Mani, S. (2001). Drive: Neurobiological and molecular mechanisms of sexual motivation. donald W. pfaff. The Quarterly Review of Biology, 76(1), 119-119. doi:10.1086/393853

Another thing I recommend is adding hyperlinks to relevant wikipedia pages within your actual text - so that readers have the ease of seeking out additional information as they stumble across a phrase or word that they don't understand.

Anyway, I hope this helps! Good luck with your final results.

Demibree (discuss • contribs) 23:07, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:14, 27 November 2017 (UTC)