Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Gender and emotion

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Hey,

I noticed you seem to be short on references specifically for your different theories of emotion. I've done a bit of digging and found a few basic starter references for you.

this one should give you a good middle point between the Jange and Bard theories. Plutchik, R. (1960)The multifactor-analytic theory of emotion, The Journal of Psychology. 50. P153-171

This one should help with the Lange theory Cannon, Walter B. (1927)The James-Lange theory of emotions: A critical examination and an alternative theory. The American Journal of Psychology 39(1) p106-124

I'll keep an eye out for more.

Good luck. Bee Taylor (discuss • contribs) 04:28, 12 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey Max

Pull your 9 iron out and get cracking!! Think about some of the different reactions you have seen from men and women to the same phenomena in the pro-shop. Weather, new equipment, whingeing about results or rules, 'problems with my short game'. Heaps of action research right in front of you!! Good luck with it.

KRD 1000 (discuss • contribs) 19:59, 30 September 2014 (UTC)KRD 1000KRD 1000 (discuss • contribs) 19:59, 30 September 2014 (UTC) (Kath Denmead, from somewhere in the northern Italian countryside)

Hey there, I was just having a scroll through your chapter and there is a lot of content. In some of the chapters from previous years they used tables and pictures to break up their content. Here's an example of one that was double starred:

https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Leadership_motivation

goodluck --Muzz2016 (discuss • contribs) 12:18, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

Heading style
Use default heading styles - remove bold, font change etc. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:54, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

Australian spelling
Use Australian spelling e.g. rationalize -> rationalise. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:54, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

Suggestion
Hey, enjoyed reading through our chapter and I think you have covered the literature well. I would only suggest to incorporate some pictures/boxes/quizzes etc to increase engagement with the reader and break up the sections. Best of luck with completing your chapter. --U3090066 (discuss • contribs) 03:14, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

Heading style
Just use the default heading style so that there is consistency between chapters e.g., remove bold. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:11, 1 September 2017 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 14:14, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi, Just a few comments: firstly, your images are numbered wrong, you start at 2 even though its your first image. Also, you should make them bigger so that we can actually see what the image is. You can do this by clicking on the image to edit it and going to the advance setting tab. Secondly, for wikiversity all the headings should be in lowercase. So your first letter of your first word would be capitalised but thats it (i got picked up on this in the feedback for the proposal) Thirdly, there seems to be a heavy focus on emotion and not a lot on gender. I realise that you haven't put all you're information in so that might not be the case, but if it is you should add more to the gender differences section. The emotions theories are really interesting though and are a good touch. Good luck, --U3115549 (discuss • contribs) 10:43, 22 October 2017 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:05, 28 November 2017 (UTC)