Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Orgasm neurology

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:55, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

Peer comments
Hi Isabelle, I have read your chapter and think you have absolutely nailed it. I agree that you don't have the word count to make any drastic changes nor do I think any are necessary. I wanted to clarify in the 'non-genital orgasm' section it states "...many other forms exist such as imagery, anal and sleep", by this are you referring to anal sex, anal stimulation or the like? It may be worthwhile being more specific. To provide the reader with more detail without using any more words it may be beneficial to embed links to Wikipedia etc i.e. you have listed Parkinson in the Dopamine section of Neurotransmitters and hormones, it would be useful to the reader to be able to click on Parkinson for more information of the disease to further understand the implications. Overall the chapter is well put together, easy to follow and answers the question. Well done, Karly --U3117418 (discuss • contribs) 07:51, 22 October 2017 (UTC)

Social contribution
Hi there! Really great chapter you have here - it is super informative. I suppose the only bit of constructive feedback I have for you is that maybe you could add in a couple of textboxes to break up some of the text. Also if you move a couple of images to the left it might help the page feel a bit less text-heavy. Overall though you have done a great job! Ewan :)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:06, 28 November 2017 (UTC)