Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Abortion and emotion

Useful Article
Hey, i found this article that I believe will be helpful for you, take a look ! https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S1701216319300258U3177123 (discuss • contribs) 21:23, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Comments
Hi, u3158923! I found a couple of charts on Wikimedia commons that I thought could be useful: and  - u3067591

This is a great chapter plan and an interesting topic. I did a brief search and noticed it can be hard to find journal articles on this topic. I have provided links to some articles you might find helpful 123--Bridie Mcinerney (discuss • contribs) 06:31, 1 October 2018 (UTC)

Hey there, Really interesting article. I enjoyed reading it. May I suggest potentially extending the "Take home points" into more of a conclusion so wrap up the topic. --Kunal Kumar - University of Canberra (discuss • contribs) 06:30, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

Formatting and Ted Talk suggestion
wow, what a tough topic to cover! I might suggest that you make your page more user friendly. Perhaps adding in some feature boxes might have helped break up the large body of texts. Additionally, be careful of where you place your images. I have been informed that right alignment is usually the best.

Lastly, I found this really informative Ted Talk that covers this topic in a different perspective. Its worth a listen https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8WNP6qp0TYE. Really well done though U3177123 (discuss • contribs) 11:38, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:59, 22 September 2018 (UTC)

Edits
This is such an important topic that you have chosen. I do think that you need to have paragraphs in your 'laws on abortion section' as it is a large chunk of texts which is hard for the reader to take in information. I think due to the nature of this topic, it may be a good idea to have some external links to websites that can help people who are effected by this. You have also haven't italicised your references. This guide should help you do this quickly: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/0/05/Cheatsheet-en.pdf! Goodluck! TaylorMal (discuss • contribs) 23:58, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

References and TED talk
Hey Daina,

Your chapter looks awesome, Good work!

I have just edited your reference list: I made the journal names and volumes italicised, uncapitalised some of the titles of the articles and fixed your headings and sub-headings because only the first word needs to be capitalised. You also don't need to have the issue number of the journal article, only the volume number. You can look at this which explains in more detail: http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2011/10/how-to-determine-whether-a-periodical-is-paginated-by-issue.html.

I found this TED talk that would go really well with your chapter aswell: https://www.ted.com/talks/aspen_baker_a_better_way_to_talk_about_abortion#t-646550

She emphasises many of the points in your 'take home points' section, and I think it would sum up your chapter really well!

I hope this helps!

--Ju3141393 (discuss • contribs) 04:47, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:58, 18 November 2018 (UTC)