Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Childhood trauma and emotion

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Hi u3142860, I thought you had made a great start on your book chapter! I noticed you had next to the section PTSD whether you should include it or not and I thought it would definitely be good to include it if you have the word count for it. I thought it would be really interesting to learn how PTSD as a child could go on to affect adults. Also, I noticed that you had broken the Alexithymia heading into another 2 headings and thought it might be better to leave out the further headings as it makes it look a bit cluttered. Also, that entire section (Affects on emotion I think it was called) it quite long so I thought it could be good to put in some images or text box's to break the section up a little. Hope this helps! -u3067591

Hi there, nice work. I am curious, have you found much on childhood trauma and Borderline Personality Disorder? Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 16:53, 2 September 2018 (UTC)

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Word Count
Hey, loved your chapter! I happened to notice you were a couple of words over the word limit, I've altered some sentences to cut down the word limit, but you're still 10 words over, something to consider before due date? good luck with exams and other assessment :) U3096514 (discuss • contribs) 02:35, 21 October 2018 (UTC) U3096514

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:55, 18 November 2018 (UTC)