Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Emotion regulation in children

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Hi Maddie, for my topic on the Autonomic Nervous System and Emotions I have discovered some really helpful research on what physiologically happens when there is emotional disregualtion. I thought it might be helpful since you are exploring this topic. I have found research on patients with ADHD and Williams syndrome. That are very informative if you wanted to add anything phyiologcal or about emotion dysregualtion in your topic. --U3160678 (discuss • contribs) 02:08, 2 September 2018 (UTC)

Hi Maddie, I fixed a grammatical error in the introduction and edited a sentence in the conclusion.--GabiK (discuss • contribs) 02:49, 23 September 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:49, 30 September 2018 (UTC)

Feedback and adding some hyperlinks
Hi Maddie

I really enjoyed reading your book chapter! I made some minor grammatical changes throughout the chapter, hopefully it helps Also, I was wondering if you some of your paragraphs were deliberately one sentence (e.g. theories used in emotion regulation) - as if they were a part of a bigger paragraph they might flow better The overview could also be slightly more detailed (e.g. add some focus questions, what will be covered in what order throughout the chapter)

Hope these improvements are timely and helpful!!

u3144311 - 2:05 21st October 2018

Minor edits
Hey there, loving the chapter, I managed to fix a dozen or so spelling errors throughout the text! Maybe also consider linking the book chapters in your 'see also' section the same way as other links in the box, so the reader can go directly to the page. Overall, well done! --U3160212 (discuss • contribs) 06:16, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:34, 12 November 2018 (UTC)