Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Impulse buying motivation

Suggestion
This is a great start to your page. It is well structured and comprehensively researched. I noticed in your overview you had a dot point addressing "what is motivation" it may be better to provide a link to the motivation wikipage rather than adressing it in your overview section. You could include this in your "see also" section - motivation(wikipedia). --Bridie Mcinerney (discuss • contribs) 01:50, 13 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi Jess! Love how your page is coming along! I made a few minor changes to your headings, Wikiversity only has capitals on the first word of headings, so I just adjusted that! I also found this article that may be of help when discussing personality and impulse buying: http://www.acrwebsite.org/search/view-conference-proceedings.aspx?Id=8383 hope that helps :) --U3160212 (discuss • contribs) 07:28, 24 August 2018 (UTC)

Hi there! First of all, well done. This book chapter has been thoroughly researched. I have two minor suggestions for this chapter. The first one is to add some kind of interactive component such as a quiz or a case study to intrigue the reader further. The secod suggestion is to turn your dot-points into full sentences and paragraphs. Again, great job! --BB7897 (discuss • contribs) 22:19, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi Jess! Your chapter is looking great for now. I would recommend that you add some content between your main headings and the subheading possibly explaining the content to follow, this should help with the flow of your chapter. I look forward to seeing the completed chapter! Good luck --Brittany (u3117719) (discuss • contribs) 02:10, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:23, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

Suggestion
i just wanted to provide a layout section for your focus questions. Maybe use a box for the focus questions and a coloured one two so that it emphasises on your focus questions for your book chapter.

here is a link to the pretty boxes page that will provide you with boxes you can use! there are coloured ones too :)

https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Help:Pretty_boxes

U3160397 (discuss • contribs) 21:57pm, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:54, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:01, 3 December 2018 (UTC)