Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Methamphetamine and emotion

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:43, 1 October 2018 (UTC)

Feedback
Your topic sounds really interesting and I look forward to seeing the finished product! Just some assistance and advice in regards to the See Also and External Links sections. Instead of providing just the link, write what the website is about, for example: Methamphetamine and Emotion (Wikipedia) - and then you highlight these words, and in edit mode select the little link button (which looks like an infinity sign, right next to the Cite button) and then paste your link into the 'External link'. If it is a Wikipedia page, then you can link the title of a Wikipedia page by entering: 'w: title' into the link 'Search pages'. I hope this makes sense/helps a bit. Otherwise, best of luck for the rest of the chapter! --Abbsu3163507 (discuss • contribs) 00:48, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

Update: I've done this for you as I don't think my explanation made much sense. Just delete the link before the linked word (as I didn't want to delete anything from your page) and edit it until your happy. I hope this is helpful --Abbsu3163507 (discuss • contribs) 02:26, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

Suggestion for journal article
Very interesting topic cannot wait to read the final book chapter. I have suggested this news article for you which looks at methamphetamine on emotional formation memory in humans.

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4332474/pdf/pone.0117062.pdf

U3160397 (discuss • contribs) 17:16pm, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:15, 16 November 2018 (UTC)

Chapter resubmission comments
The main noted changes were:
 * 1) Conversion of many bullet points into sentences and paragraphs.
 * 2) Expansion of many bullet points into more complete explanations.
 * 3) Quiz added.

Also see these additional copyedits. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:34, 15 December 2018 (UTC)