Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Walking and emotion

Topic suggestion
Hey ! great book chapter, Have you ever heard of mindfulness walking ? I thought it might be useful to add it into your book chapter. Take a look at this starter reference https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s12671-016-0550-8 U3177123 (discuss • contribs) 21:51, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:06, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

Defining emotion
great to see the active development on this topic. A suggestion about the "Definition emotion" section: Basically, defining emotion isn't really necessary. Instead, provide a brief definition (e.g., in the Overview) and then link to dedicated resources about emotion, such as emotion (Wikiversity) and/or emotion (Wikipedia). This will free the chapter structure and content up to focus in on summarising the best available psychological theory and research about the topic, which is "How does walking affect emotion?" - doing so will do a better job of addressing the marking criteria than will provide definitional material about general concepts. In case this isn't obvious, consider that you are not currently planning to describe walking per se in much detail - instead, better to briefly describe it and link to walking (Wikipedia). Hope that makes sense. Let me know if I can do anything else. Sincerely, James. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:42, 5 October 2018 (UTC)

Physical exercise chapters
if haven't already come across them, check out these other motivation and emotion physical exercise book chapters and consider where/how to integrate relevant links within the main text and/or in the See also section. Doing so would help to embed and intermesh these chapters, creating rich text. You can also add relevant links from these chapter to this walking and emotion chapter (which would count as social contributions). Sincerely, James. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:47, 5 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi there! Your chapter looks great! The pictures are appropriate and well-placed. The quiz questions are great! I love this topic, it's pretty interesting and relevant! One teeny tiny suggestion, for your 'see also' links, maybe try and give them a capital letter? Such a picky thing, I know! Good luck! --U3142860 (discuss • contribs) 03:47, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:25, 18 November 2018 (UTC)