Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Cognitive reappraisal of emotion

Italics
Hey, Great start to the book chapter just letting you know when you use italics for referencing you don't use the quotation marks instead you use multiple apostrophes. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Tutorial/Formatting Goodluck --Quinopop (discuss • contribs) 03:32, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:00, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Comments about draft

 * 1) Overview - consider incorporating a case study/example
 * 2) Consider expanding development of focus questions
 * 3) Use active rather than passive voice e.g., "This chapter will explore..." -> "This chapter explores..."
 * 4) Rather than "What is cognitive reappraisal?" and "What is emotion regulation?", how about focusing more directly on the topic: "What is cognitive reappraisal of emotion?"
 * 5) Expand figure captions to connect with key point(s) being made in the text
 * 6) Consider using sub-headings for the main/longest sections
 * 7) Avoid directional referencing (e.g., "As discussed above")
 * 8) Use interwiki links for the first mention of key words
 * 9) See also - include destination in brackets - see examples in other chapters
 * 10) References - check and correct capitalisation
 * 11) External links - rename link so that it is more user friendly
 * 12) Consider inviting peer feedback

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:51, 17 October 2019 (UTC)

Good to see this coming along. Based on a quick review of the latest version, some further suggestions:
 * 1) Where a section has sub-sections, include an introductory paragraph before the first sub-section.
 * 2) Use 0 or 2 ore more sub-sections - i.e., avoid having a single sub-section
 * 3) Remove citations from headings
 * 4) See also - consider also linking to relevant book chapters and Wikipedia articles

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:47, 18 October 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:13, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:15, 17 November 2019 (UTC)

social contribution
really good information on the chapter, I would consider having a bit more detail in the research part of the chapter, as well as adding in more links. overall great chapter with helpful information --U3187314 (discuss • contribs) 03:08, 29 August 2021 (UTC)