Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Emotional abuse

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Hey there, under your heading Psychological theory & emotional abuse perhaps you can list the two major theories rather than just "theory 1, theory 2". I don't think you should have a sub heading under conclusion, the conclusion should sum up the rest of your chapter. Make sure to add at least 3 references to get full marks for your topic development as well as an external link and a see more link. Looking forward to reading your chapter :) Sunbear25 (discuss • contribs) 00:33, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

Super helpful thank you!! - u3169884

Hi! This is really interesting and I look forward to reading the finished product. I found these two youtube videos that could be interesting to put somewhere in as links, that just have signs of emotional abuse, and emotional manipulation.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=logQdS2egeQ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtjpY_lDn5U

Also another recommendation I have is because some of the topics you are touching on within your chapter are of a delicate nature or signs that people may not have recognised as abuse perhaps you could link to some external sources if people are requiring assistance, I have linked a DV website below :)

https://www.whiteribbon.org.au/find-help/domestic-violence-hotlines/

--Tahnee Smithers (discuss • contribs) 16:55, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

Oh you're a gem! very helpful. Thank you!

Hi there, am enjoying your progress so far on what sounds like a very interesting and well thought out book chapter. I am excited to read more. u3176290

Hey again, make sure you include an overview in your book chapter. Consider using less examples an perhaps incorporate some of your own made up case studies instead? [|Theory] Sunbear25 (discuss • contribs) 01:46, 16 October 2019 (UTC)

Hi there! I love what you have done with the chapter, very interesting. Thought it might be interesting to look into the emotional abuse that ex-offenders face and how it differs from the general population. This link could be helpful: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5067087/ Hope this helps! U3178428 (discuss • contribs) 3:51, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

Hey! I really enjoy the use of case studies in your chapter, it would be amazing if you added some more information to them. They offer great context to the information you're providing but more depth would really help to solidify the content! Good Luck! --U3162204 (discuss • contribs) 05:44, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

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