Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Food and fear

Peer feedback
Hi Grace! I have had a read through your chapter and it's super interesting! A tip that I would add is to include hyperlinks in the first introduction of key terms. I have listed some below with corresponding URLs from Wikipedia that may help:


 * 1) Fear - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fear
 * 2) Evolutionary development - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evolutionary_developmental_biology
 * 3) Anxiety - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anxiety
 * 4) Temporal lobe - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Temporal_lobe
 * 5) Amygdala - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amygdala
 * 6) Phobias - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phobia
 * 7) Anorexia nervosa - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anorexia_nervosa

I hope these were of some assistance to you! Good luck, thanks, Maddie.--120.21.77.190 (discuss) 06:55, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:04, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Interwiki links
Use interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles. For example: Who was Nostradamus? Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:31, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:41, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:08, 18 November 2019 (UTC)