Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Hope theory

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Hi there, great page with a great layout and use of literature! If I may add that the opening two sentences in the overview section need to be changed or re-worded. I makes sense but a better choice or words would suit your opening statements for this page. Apart from that, the pages looks great! Good luck and hope this helps. U3175650 (discuss • contribs) 01:58, 19 October 2019 (UTC)

Heading casing
Hi, great chapter page. Clear evidence of effort and a good amount of research. I think the key changes now are mostly formatting; I think your chapter would benefit from utilising more heading lines, just to space out the information more and allow it to read more easily. Consider using more coloured text boxes for key information (like you used for your focus questions), this would work well for your case study as it makes the information stand out. Ensure you include both internal and external links, it may be worthwhile to utilise links to websites and personal stories/blogs about hope. Here are a couple of links to interesting websites that discuss more on hope theory. http://www.thepositivepsychologypeople.com/hope-theory-and-goals-at-work/ https://www.oxfordhandbooks.com/view/10.1093/oxfordhb/9780195187243.001.0001/oxfordhb-9780195187243-e-030 U3175218 (discuss • contribs) 01:33, 19 October 2019 (UTC)

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Interwiki links
Use interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles. For example: Who was Nostradamus? Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:21, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:54, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:08, 18 November 2019 (UTC)