Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Perfectionism and depression

Comments
Hi there! Great work on all the research you found on your topic, it was very interesting to read. Might I suggest adding some colour into your chapter with some colour text boxes? It might help make your chapter pop a little more to match the really interesting topic of depression and the role perfectionism plays! Good luck and I hope you receive a great mark :) --Maddkilby (discuss • contribs) 13:00, 19 October 2019 (UTC)

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Just drawing your attention to the suggestion above. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:43, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:12, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Potential study/topic to include
Hi there, was thinking this study might be relevant to the chapter:

[https://books.google.com.au/books?hl=en&lr=&id=aN6ZDwAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PA13&dq=The+moderating+role+of+social+media+on+perfectionism+and+depression&ots=A2It74sNZ5&sig=7IY1V6dkel-G2OADlJbd8HVD6ZE#v=onepage&q=The%20moderating%20role%20of%20social%20media%20on%20perfectionism%20and%20depression&f=false Hashemi, M., & Nweke, G. E. (2019). The moderating role of social media on perfectionism and depression. Social impact of media discourse in the age of iDeology. A perspective from the global periphery, 13.]

Other than what the title suggests, it also reflects on how self-comparison behaviour affects self-esteem and depressive symptoms in perfectionist individuals.

--DaleHulm (discuss • contribs) 10:49, 14 October 2019 (UTC)

Hey girl. Just looking at your reference list, make sure the doi's have a link attached for people to access. I also noted some spacing errors between names (each contribution isn't separated onto an individual line). See familicide link for an example: https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2018/Familicide_motivation

--U3178335 (discuss • contribs) 11:09, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:19, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:57, 17 November 2019 (UTC)