Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Postpartum return to work motivation

Japan
U344461: I'm not sure if you are planning to focus nationally or internationally for this piece, but Japan had a major issue with this a few years ago looking at both the parent and workplaces' motivation to have mothers return after giving birth. Might be a good place to look at differences/similarities between cultures.

Learning features
Hi, I think you've made a good start to your chapter. I think it would be really beneficial if you included some colour. It would help break up large areas of text for the reader. These boxes could include key points/real life examples/case studies. This can be done easily with feature boxes. I've included a link here to a really helpful website which shows you different types of boxes and how to put them onto your page. Good luck! Kaylah-3163515 (discuss • contribs) 02:07, 10 September 2019 (UTC)

resource
Hi! I thing that you may find this useful : https://cjnr.archive.mcgill.ca/article/viewFile/1459/1459. --U3173638 (discuss • contribs) 10:35, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:23, 24 November 2019 (UTC)

Book chapter resubmission feedback
These changes were reviewed. Notable improvements were: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:17, 23 December 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Overview has been improved.
 * 2) A more international perspective is evidence
 * 3) Theory and research have been strengthened
 * 4) Grammar has been improved
 * 5) APA style for reference list has been improved
 * 6) Social contributions were claimed (these have been moved to User:U3065611), however no links to evidence were provided.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:19, 9 December 2019 (UTC)

Multimedia resubmission feedback
The new multimedia presentation was reviewed. Points of note: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:17, 23 December 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) There is an improved focus on the topic.
 * 2) Audio doesn't always match the video.
 * 3) There is no Overview or Conclusion.
 * 4) Check the last 10 seconds - the audio seems to loop back to the beginning.
 * 5) Production qualities have improved.