Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Stalking motivation

Comments
Hi! I really enjoyed reading your topic. Especially, I liked how you explained the motives why stalkers stalk and the different types of stalkers out there. There were minor grammar errors present, but overall I liked the layout of your book chapter. Good luck on the progress of your topic, I look forward to your multimedia presentation! --U3161960 (discuss • contribs) 09:30, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

Topic Development Feedback
Fantastic work on your book chapter! Your use of pictures and text boxes makes it super exciting to look at, and you can tell that you worked really hard on this assignment. I really like that you included the coping strategies victims use, this was very interesting. If it's not too late, maybe you could find a quote from a previous victim and insert that somewhere (perhaps in the coping strategies section)? I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with when the 3 minute multimedia video is inserted! Goodluck and I hope you get a good mark for this assignment, you earnt it. --Maddkilby (discuss • contribs) 12:30, 19 October 2019 (UTC)

Your topic development looks really good so far. You have incorporated a wide use of references already- your research must be coming along nicely. I appreciate your use of inserting boxes into the page, especially making one into a quiz to test knowledge. Great idea. However, if possible, I'd suggest changing the one of them to a different colour as having them the same colour is slightly harsh on the eyes. The external and internal links you have incorporated to support reader learning are great. I definitely enjoyed that the Netflix series YOU made it into the external link (bring on season 2). The headings are very clear, and it makes it easier for the reader to skip to sections that interest them. I think they will cover the topic nicely. Overall, I think your topic development is really well done, and I hope you score well on this assessment. Can't wait to see the final chapter, I'll definitely be reading the whole thing. Kaiti. --KBPrimrose (discuss • contribs) 10:24, 28 August 2019 (UTC)User:KBPrimrose
 * Excellent feedback ! Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:47, 28 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you ! I will definitely do your suggestions!

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:49, 26 September 2019 (UTC)

Book Chapter Final Feedback
Just a follow up from my earlier feedback, now that you've had time to complete it. It looks great. Honestly, well done. The colour schemes you decided on were great, the use of case studies, quizzes and images is engaging and the layout is easily readable. Your information is neatly presented and in-depth. It clearly covers the topic well, and it is highly interesting. I can tell that you've put a lot of effort into this chapter, and that you were actually interested in learning about the topic, whilst making it easy to teach others. I truly hope you score well on this assessment. You still deserve it. Kaiti. Thanks kaiti! I appreciate your feedback and I hope that you did well with yours as well! -glenda

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:07, 7 November 2019 (UTC)

--U3165244 (discuss • contribs) 23:36, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

Hi thank you for this feed back! I will work hard on my grammar as this is always my weakness. I would like to let you know that I had so much fun working on this assessment. Thank you for giving us opportunity to have this experience. It is all worth it! Thanks!

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:04, 17 November 2019 (UTC)